WOW.
That was amazingly written, it really was powerful. I think that even a non-religious person could appreciate the compassionate, righteous way that you wrote that. You're an amazing poet.
And don't worry about not reading mine...I was just looking for something to do.
:)
haha, you know, we're doing poetry at school right now (topic is 'the teenage experience'), yours is so much better than the ones we've been reading + studying
Whoo! Go Eriko! Out in the public poem publishing world!
I'm not very religous either, But I liked it, very good. It's very...Poemish...You can just tell Im great with words cant you? Lol.