July 20th, 2007 at 07:17pm
Yeah, it's short but good at the same time,
Also sad, *cry cry*
But I do love this one too. X]
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June 25th, 2007 at 01:10pm
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Wow, it's really good. And I like short poems with lots of meaning, long ones get boring..June 16th, 2007 at 06:13pm
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[b]Short, Simple, Powerful.
That was fantastic, can't wait to read more. ;)[/b]June 16th, 2007 at 12:42pm -
oh wow i relly like this poem its really great!June 14th, 2007 at 07:08pm
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Aw this is awesome.
Short, sweet and powerful
Keep it up =]June 14th, 2007 at 06:07pm -
This is so amazing.
I will take caution. : )
You too, okay?
Okay.June 12th, 2007 at 09:34pm -
I like it!!!!
It's short but it has an extremely powerful meaning!!!!
11 stars out of 10!!!!June 12th, 2007 at 06:54pm -
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OMG.
That is a really good poem Daniel!
You are so creative!
Can't wait to read your other poems and story =DJune 12th, 2007 at 06:26pm
it soo meaningful, and powerful x