You mentioned this on my journal post and I was intrigued.
"Lampshades, cement, pave the way for the crowning of the drag King.
Dressed in rags of eighties glamour, forgotten pearls left in their wrappers too long to be real."
I really, REALLY love those lines.
The only thing that threw me off is, I think it would be more effective with different line breaks...line breaks can really change the way a poem is read, y'know? But I'm no expert to be throwing out critique here, lol. Overall, I liked it. =)
"Lampshades, cement, pave the way for the crowning of the drag King.
Dressed in rags of eighties glamour, forgotten pearls left in their wrappers too long to be real."
I really, REALLY love those lines.
The only thing that threw me off is, I think it would be more effective with different line breaks...line breaks can really change the way a poem is read, y'know? But I'm no expert to be throwing out critique here, lol. Overall, I liked it. =)