Stupid Alarm Clock - Comments

This is really good. I like the style of rhythm and rhyme a lot.

Rating: ****

Well, this is a poem I submitted to my English class. I got a good grade, but my teacher told me that it was a "shame" this talent was wasted since the poem is "cynical" in her opinion.


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Well, gee Teach. I thought it was a golly good poem. Righteo, yes? ;~;

xD