Magnet Poem - Comments

O_O Kudos for you if you wrote that all with just kitchen magnets...

I have trouble getting anything good out of them. But they usually spark something and get my writing juice flowing.

I like the title. Personally, I can never title anything, but I think that's quite a snazzy title...

And the poem... dancing to the rhythm of laughter, I like that. I like how you write about God and such... it's refreshing, even though I'm not really a Christian... (but I went to mass on Christmas Eve! ¬_¬)

It's delicate and beautiful.

this is well good
you write how i wanna come across lol
if that makes any sense :)