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  • Lady Phantasm

    Lady Phantasm (100)

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    this poem is real deep,
    ilike the way you
    used repition in your poem
    it gives more effect
    and meaning in the words,
    i can almost relate to the words,
    well almost.
    January 11th, 2009 at 08:06pm
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