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  • AnExaltationOfLarks

    AnExaltationOfLarks (100)

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    Okay I loved this one too! Although one bit annoyed me, just cuz of the structure lol....although I'm sure it makes sense...
    "Why am I
    Creating the person I'd like to see?"
    I dunno I think it would look better if it was
    "Why am I creating
    The person I'd like to see?"

    but anywaysssss awesome poem and it hits home too! Although I'm getting better at just being me!
    July 24th, 2009 at 11:23pm
  • Namber

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    =D ta =]
    February 1st, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • DeecindaSpider

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    fooookin awesome!!!

    me lurvs it :D
    January 23rd, 2009 at 12:43pm
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