Honey, I wrote you a poem - Comments

  • akmaoptea

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    i love the form of this poem
    how it repeats itself slightly each time, just changing a little here & there.
    which makes the flow awesome & makes it more powerful when you do switch that flow at the end.
    April 6th, 2007 at 03:33pm
  • Vixen

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    Funny Ha Ha
    March 20th, 2007 at 01:15pm
  • Inksie

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    So emotionally beautiful.:]
    I think that's how love should be.
    February 17th, 2007 at 05:20am
  • Legomannj

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    Thank you=)
    February 15th, 2007 at 09:44pm
  • castaway

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    love the contrast of the sweet title to the rest of the poem
    February 8th, 2007 at 06:57am
  • Dilt

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    nice poem=) Clap
    me likey
    January 30th, 2007 at 05:32pm