Honey, I wrote you a poem - Comments

i love the form of this poem
how it repeats itself slightly each time, just changing a little here & there.
which makes the flow awesome & makes it more powerful when you do switch that flow at the end.

Funny

So emotionally beautiful.:]
I think that's how love should be.

Thank you=)

love the contrast of the sweet title to the rest of the poem

nice poem=)
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