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  • MillionChancesBurned

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    Wow. I wish I could describe how much I love this poem. But all that's gonna happen is me saying a bunc of overused adjectives.
    But, I love this. A lot :D
    Amazing job (:
    January 22nd, 2009 at 07:50am
  • AllWeAreIsBullets

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    wow,deep,
    ILOVEIT!
    it's very good/great/fantastic/grand
    January 21st, 2009 at 09:37pm
  • Alison_Adopted

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    I really like this. I think it’s very insightful of what the girl is feeling. I’m not sure what’s meant by two blue seas but I like how it leads to the line about blood. [I totally get that connection] Seriously, keep you the great work! Post more of your stuff, please!
    January 21st, 2009 at 05:18am
  • lollipopluxuryxox

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    wow
    this is really good <333
    alot better then anyother poem ive read so far.
    i don't know why, but i loved the part when she wrote with the blood
    January 20th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • victory

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    The first stanza is confusing but overall its pretty good =) Good Job
    January 18th, 2009 at 08:39pm
  • Heruna

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    Wow, I love it (:
    I agree with both the other comments XD
    Keep writing
    xx
    January 18th, 2009 at 12:23pm
  • shesanimrod.

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    Wow.
    Thats pretty deep.
    I like it lots, :]
    January 18th, 2009 at 05:27am
  • pikachufannumber1

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    Amazing. Kind of hard to understand at first. Just a heads up :)
    January 18th, 2009 at 03:56am
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