Together We Shall Conquer - Comments

goodgoodgood ! :D

from
priest (:

=O
AMAZING!!
i love it hunnie !
its cute !
has he read it yet?
<3

I think it would be better if you said how they protect and give each other the strength for each other. Instead of having the guy always protecting the girl, ect. and I think "Undieing" is spelled "Undying" but anyway. I really liked this poem :) Hope to hear and read more from you