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  • Antagonist

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    This is beautiful, and it flows right off the tongue if you say it out loud!

    I love it!
    January 29th, 2009 at 01:25am
  • zillaidma

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    Oh my God Meeka! Tha is so precious! I adore the last stanza as much as the first!! Especially the last line of the whole poem!
    This is so depressing though...are you okay? I'm here if you need anything. Don't be afraid.
    All in all, your maddening writing skills are great!!
    I can just smell the pages of the book you'll end up publishing when i'm holding it in my hands when I"m at the store. *sucks in air* Oh yeahhhhhh!!!
    XD
    January 28th, 2009 at 07:41am
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