Blend In - Comments

better than mine...check 'em out

I know >.< It's not really one of my best ones. I just randomly found it in my notebook and decided to post it, because I kind of liked it. I have better poems, though, if you look. Well, I guess they're better.

Well, It has great potential, but I think you could do a lot better. You should make the imagery more impressionable. It didn't really leave a mark in my memory, the imagery I mean. But the poem is very good the way it is. But like I said it could be better.