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  • Sharksnacks.

    Sharksnacks. (100)

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    better than mine...check 'em out
    February 13th, 2009 at 08:53am
  • Dreams.of.Someday

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    I know >.< It's not really one of my best ones. I just randomly found it in my notebook and decided to post it, because I kind of liked it. I have better poems, though, if you look. Well, I guess they're better.
    February 2nd, 2009 at 05:05am
  • RLR08

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    Well, It has great potential, but I think you could do a lot better. You should make the imagery more impressionable. It didn't really leave a mark in my memory, the imagery I mean. But the poem is very good the way it is. But like I said it could be better.
    January 30th, 2009 at 12:13am
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