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Kruhl
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I liked it. It was true. It was good. But all your poems are in the same format. Change it up. It makes all you do unique. That's where I see need of improvment.
June 22nd, 2007 at 01:50pm
sound the alarm.
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To be honest, I found it boring, repetitive and cliched.
Try and think outside the box a little and use some interesting imagery.
June 20th, 2007 at 09:10pm
ad;wh-re;able
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THAT WAS AMAIZING
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June 20th, 2007 at 09:00pm
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