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  • Elle est...

    Elle est... (100)

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    Dude this is one wicked awesome, kick-butt poem. And I agree, you should make it into a song. All I've got to say is that this rocked my freakin socks off!!! :)
    April 9th, 2009 at 12:42am
  • xFidelity

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    Oh, wow. This is an incredible piece. I really liked it, which is rare since I hardly ever like anything full-out. Wonderful job.

    And sorry - I don't mean to pry, but was this based on actual event?
    April 8th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • zillaidma

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    Wow. I agree with [i]bekek[/i]. this is beautiful and sounds like a song. you should make up a tune for it ;)
    I like the first stanza. But I think the ending was F'N AWESOME!!! :DDD
    I loved the ending. *wipes tear*
    great poem :)
    April 4th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • bekek

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    this sounds like a song. it's truly beautiful.
    February 6th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • uniquely_brandi

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    daaayumm sami! i like it =]]]]
    what inspired you for this one?
    =]
    February 4th, 2009 at 10:43pm