The Broken Heart!!!! - Comments

I like the use of bracketts. Bracketts pwn.

its good but who wrote it u melissa or u jessica

Doodlesboops....
Arrgh.
Here is the way I told you to maybe, just maybe, submit it as.
-AHEM-
[b]
The Broken Heart!!!
The world is a cold-hearted place,
The sorrow of everything around you fiats into the ground,
No one cares,
You’re crying,
No one to hold you,
[Confused]
No one to talk to!!
[No One]
But you!
And your the one that thinks to yourself (What the fuck did I do?!)
Only wonder to yourself,
[Thinking]…
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I might be wrong but then again... Right at a point.