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  • Sent by Ravens

    Sent by Ravens (100)

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    The imagery and the rhyming are rather superb. The only thing I'm iffy about is the second/third line in the first verse, but I'm not sure what to say to make it better because it fits, but I'm not sure it flows perfectly. Apart from that, it's an excellent poem.
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:22am
  • rosesarebetter

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    amazing, you should defiantly enter!
    February 10th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • Catakomb Kitten

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    I really don't have any criticism, I think this is really beautiful.
    The imagery is very striking to me.
    Enter it.
    Now.
    lol

    <3
    February 10th, 2009 at 08:49pm
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