April 18th, 2009 at 03:47am
i like your poem eventhough its weird to like something about abuse.
i like your poem because its something everyone uses as an excuse.
they say it happened to them, for some people its plain ol' true.
but i like your poem most of all, because its my favorite color blue.
i turned sixteen of january 22 09. so this title caught my eye.
thanks for posting it. i hope you'll read mine once i put it on here.
Love-my-eyes (Rae-rae)
This stanza's my favorite.
"Pretty pink presents
Weaving ribbons of hope
Bubbly laughter
Dreams hanging by a single rope"
I like the ribbon/hanging image. It ties the lines together nicely. Pretty.
And sad.
But you know what I'm sayin'.