First of all, i must congratulate you for the rhyme...i, personally, find it harder and harder everytime to keep it, and i admire everyone who does it...and writes good poetry too.
Which takes me to thing no 2: you wrote a good poem. I liked it...you know, it could make into a song. ^_^
Which takes me to thing no 2: you wrote a good poem. I liked it...you know, it could make into a song. ^_^