Loud and Clear - Comments

To be a 2.00am-poem, it was pretty amazing. I know that the worst critic is yourself and so on, but no parts in this one was shitty! And it was a long poem too! Exciting, it's like reading a story in another format ^^

believe me, that was pretty darn awesome for two in the morning. great job!!! and i love that song

how can you say this is shitty? and besides, writing for yourself is usually when the best writing comes out. especially in the middle of the night. i really liked this, i could def. relate to it. its so...fed up? maybe thats the words im looking for...anywho, i liked it, decided to read it since you read mine and besides...this lovely piece of work had no comments.