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  • last time

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    I really liked this piece. The first line of the last stanza seems to throw the flow off a little to me. Other than that the words fit this piece. And the rhyming works as well. The third and fifth stanzas stand out to me. Nicely done.
    March 11th, 2009 at 05:31am
  • lozapunk

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    that poem is wicked , ur reli clever its inspiring
    March 10th, 2009 at 08:38pm
  • We're Pretending

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    pretty good!
    March 10th, 2009 at 08:15pm
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