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  • jetblackhotelmirror

    jetblackhotelmirror (100)

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    as appreciative as i am of comments-especially that of constructive criticism-with any writing i love using flaws to enhance it. it might just be for me and noone else knows why-but that's just fine with me. whenever i craft a poem or lyric i make sure everything is as it should be in my mind and for different purposes. :)
    March 14th, 2009 at 10:54pm
  • line that stuff up

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    a bit rough around the edges, I still like it though. It just needs some revision as do all pieces of writing :]
    March 14th, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • controllinginsanity

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    nice poem! I like it a lot
    March 14th, 2009 at 07:26pm
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