March 26th, 2009 at 12:03am
Wow, Meeka, this is awesome!
I believe that last stanza was good closure, as all your awesome poems! :D :D
I was about to ask when you'd put another poem up, and you finally did (after more than a month! Good thing it was on March. :) I like March)
This poem reminds me of the war... but also on how reality is. Like the third stanza explains some of it. And the fourth one of what some people see and how they feel about it.
*thumbs up and throws confetti and cooked rice* Nice job on the new poem :) I liked it.
YUPPIE!!! MEEKA IS BACK WITH POEMS!!!! [b]:D[/b]
You Finally wrote another one YAY!
I'm so glad
Really good poem i applaud you for your thoughts