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  • Okubukai

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    Nice .. ^_^

    great long job!
    March 27th, 2009 at 04:35am
  • After_A_While

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    Wow... thanks! :) That really means a lot... I also thought some of the lines were to long, but then I just read them out loud and they seemed to work. I'm glad someone other then me and my cat like my poems! ;)
    March 26th, 2009 at 02:07pm
  • Shadow Spirit

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    Wow.
    This is really strong and really powerful.
    The rhyme scheme works really nicely and it flows so well (some of the lines look too long to flow, but when you read them, they DO work :D )
    I love these lines: [This is the horror of all that was good Of everything that had no faith and everything that should]
    You've done a wonderful job :)
    March 25th, 2009 at 08:58pm
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