This is really good!!!
I liked the way you described how you see our territory as being our territory lol emmm, maybe what would be a good way to improve would be to get in some form of pattern? Like, alliteration or something but I think this is a really powerful piece of writing :) (I like writing reviews) xxx
I liked the way you described how you see our territory as being our territory lol emmm, maybe what would be a good way to improve would be to get in some form of pattern? Like, alliteration or something but I think this is a really powerful piece of writing :) (I like writing reviews) xxx