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  • the god of thunder.

    the god of thunder. (300)

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    Oh how my admiration on your grows.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 05:47am
  • Twisted Romance

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    amazing great imagery
    April 16th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • emstx

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    Awesome. Completely utterly brillant.

    I like freaky stuff about serial killers like this. Perhaps you should change the ending a bit. Like start describing the way in which he's approaching her and all that jazz. Then stab her.

    I'm not pyscho, I'm just fascinated by pyschos.
    April 4th, 2009 at 02:08pm
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