Obsession - Comments

"I am wrapped up, but in your lies
My blood is frozen, I am numb" - amazing. I love the effect the layout has on this poem, as you go through all the seasons. It really tells a story of obsession.

This is really really great! Your extended metaphor works really well in this poem. absolutly beautiful :D

Wow, this is beautiful.

I love the sustained metaphor and comparisons between the seasons and the relationship. I've seen it done a couple of times before, but your interpretation of it is very original and well-crafted.

Your description is lovely, and you other, single metaphors also work very well. I particularly love the very powerful line "My blood is frozen, I am numb".

It's very, very good.

Wow. This is a fanatasic poem.
Realy great :D