Omg truly amazing and yeah i envy the rhyming ability to somehow i always think it takes away from the actual message inside the poem itself but you possess the ability to make it influence your message to grr:)
this was really good. i'm so jealous of the rhyming ability u possess!! i've never been a good rhymer. so jealous. anyway, nice job. deep and i love that it has a true purpose and meaning.