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  • lalaliar

    lalaliar (110)

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    I read the first chapter of your story, so I figured I'd see what else you had posted. This is really sad [b].__.[/b] the lines;

    "So I let her believe in her wings
    They will help her fly to a place without pain
    Away from the torment the world brings"

    despite how sad it is, makes me want to go 'aww'.
    April 16th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • RiLaMer

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    I love this poem. It makes me think of fantasy novels. Kepp it up!
    April 16th, 2009 at 07:10pm
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