I don't really like the title, I think it is too blunt for the poem itself. You have great style here. Your rhythm although varies would make for a good song. I enjoyed how in some stanzas you would start three lines with the same word or letter, it adds atheistic view to the poem beyond the words.
My personal favorites lines were:
How you and I know each other
Is by the sands of time
The paths of old
Trails long left in the past
Was once a future
It's paradoxical and quite beautiful. I am surprised you do not have more poetry on this site. Anyway, great job.
My personal favorites lines were:
How you and I know each other
Is by the sands of time
The paths of old
Trails long left in the past
Was once a future
It's paradoxical and quite beautiful. I am surprised you do not have more poetry on this site. Anyway, great job.