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i like that toooooooooooo

[quote="I'mAboutToBreak."]Oh okies thanks will change now :] thankies x[/quote]
You're welcome

Oh okies thanks will change now :] thankies x

[quote="I'mAboutToBreak."]i done spell check and there was only the fact I forgot to capitalise (I've) .. xD
what ya mean it doesn't seem forced.. is that good or bad.. :][/quote]

hmm

[i]I'm glad that your here[/i]

*you're

i don't know why everyone makes mistakes like that. It's pretty easy to remember the difference between your and you're.

That's good, some people would write just about anything in order to rhyme, and you don't come off as one of them.

i done spell check and there was only the fact I forgot to capitalise (I've) .. xD
what ya mean it doesn't seem forced.. is that good or bad.. :]

The rhyming doesn't seem that forced, but then again not everyone can write ABAB and get away with it.
also; spell check is your friend! :D

I love this one =] tis deep and awesome.
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