July 22nd, 2009 at 09:11pm
Ohhh, holyyy shiznit.
I love the last 5 lines, they're really very angry sounding.
Your poems always surprise me, whenever you tell me you've written another one when I read it somehow you always surprise me. (=
At the begining it's sad, and then it's pissed off. I like it.
I
LOVE
IT.
i saw your comment on my poem and i decided to see yours.
and they're all very amazing :]