A moment in the drift - Comments

I was actually one of the first users on Mibba, but I just recently started posting my work.

Oh dear, tell me about it. The slash is really making me lose respect for this place. There are some really good writers out there with huge potential that waste their time on writing nonsense of that sort. But I'm not giving up just yet.

*laughs and slaps the table with his hand*

mm...I hve my moments..but you kind lady...have only been on here for a short period of time..and already have a fan of your work. toomany ppl on here have forgotten that this started as a "Creative Writing" site, and not a MCR shrine. I'm guilty in having written a few MCR fanfics...but they sure don't involve slashes or Frerard....

[quote="I will kill for her"]a relief really, i was afraid i was losing my edge....your poetry kinda made me realize that i've gotten lax in my work.[/quote]
nah, don't let anything discourage you.
once you find it - you'll have it forever. And you, my sir, have quite the talent.

a relief really, i was afraid i was losing my edge....your poetry kinda made me realize that i've gotten lax in my work.

[b]Thank you.[/b] I was starting to lose faith that one fine piece of poetry will be posted. And yet you proved me wrong.

It's very interesting how the lines are long. I respect your ability to go beyond the rules and create something completely different and unique. And your word choice is simply stunning.
It keeps the reader interested, which to me is one of the most important things. It's fun to read and overall - it has all the elements a poem should have. I salute you.