Yet again you manage to sweep me off my feet. So how many poems do you plan on posting tonight? I'm feeling rather threatened :mrgreen:
You can tell your work is for a more intelligent reader, not just for anyone, and I haven't encountered that in a while. I want something that gets me curious, that makes me think, and with you - I get it.
The ending is beautiful, you sure know your way with words.
As Bogart would put it, [i]I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship[/i].