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  • Lonely Speck

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    Mmm, fantastic story you're telling. Wonderful word choice...and yet, you manage to rhyme at the same time. I like your style.. Well, all I can say is very good.

    My favorite part is probably the word choice, yes.
    May 28th, 2009 at 02:08am
  • The Ginger One

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    Wow i think your great and don't listen to him you are fanatstic at what you do and when your this good you don't need variety
    May 26th, 2009 at 11:36pm
  • oscar wilde;

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    I like it :) There's a nice story, it's topical and your use of language is as fantastic as ever.

    I do think you could stand to change your style a little though. Get some variation in there.
    April 30th, 2009 at 10:12pm
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