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Catastrophic Dreams (100)

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I Loved it
it's very deep
it was also well writen
keep up the amazing work!

July 19th, 2007 at 09:20pm

AliveButAlone (100)

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Actually the second verse sounds like it about me too.
Look at me, you said this before, I do think about myself too much.

July 19th, 2007 at 08:43pm

Lyddy Cool (300)

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i like it. its good. i like the way the last line defies the structure you had going =] really well written. and the emotion, rawr, its like, falling out of the edge of the poem XD awesome =]

July 19th, 2007 at 08:36pm

Ding-Fries-Are-Done! (100)

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wow!!!
impressive!!
its very emotional too!! the emotion just leaps out at me from the comp screen!
very very good!!

July 19th, 2007 at 08:32pm

AliveButAlone (100)

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Wow, the last paragraph sounds like its about me, probably not, I'm just a self obssessed paranoid person anyway.
Anywho
Its great
Nice =]

July 19th, 2007 at 08:31pm