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  • SmileForMeDarling

    SmileForMeDarling (100)

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    oh, I really like this one.

    I especially like the way it's written, and the way you break up the lines and stanzas.

    I also must commend you on the wording, it's brilliant. (:
    May 21st, 2009 at 07:05am
  • Darkest Spells

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    wow. i like it : ].
    i'm brittany by the way.
    ali *points to hkittyly* is my best friend : ]
    May 3rd, 2009 at 03:28am
  • hkittyly

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    I feel I should comment this.
    This is the most epic poem ever, and if you ever got rid of it, or the other story for that manner, I would be severly disappointed. I might even attempt to cry, if it would get it back.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 04:20pm
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