don't be afraid to scream it. trust me, it makes you feel much better. anyways, i liked when it rhymed but not so much the interigation part in the beginning. still a good poem, though.
you shouldn't cut yourself. I came really close to starting to do that. but, then everything got better. i'm sure that'll happen to you if you stop cutting yourself.
This is great
The questions at the start sorta set the scene
and make you think before you read it.
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