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  • innocent wolves

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    I agree with the above: "clinging to issues as solid as dust" - that really stands out, for me, I think it's because it's such an awesome choice of words. And the metaphore is really good ^^ So is "drunk on depression". I can totally relate.
    Awesome poem - as always hehe ;)
    August 11th, 2007 at 10:27pm
  • horsie890

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    Loved it as usual. Your poems are always super awesome. Especially the line the person before me mentioned.
    July 28th, 2007 at 11:54am
  • narcotics

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    that was awesome.

    [i]Clinging to issues as solid as dust[/i]

    i really liked that line, it stood out to me. :D
    July 27th, 2007 at 02:30pm
  • MCR-Andi

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    ...whoa.

    I loved it.

    It's something I definitely relate to.

    That was honestly...amazing.
    July 27th, 2007 at 11:01am