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  • bitemesweet

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    That is beautiful. I can't sing for crap. XD
    June 25th, 2009 at 03:40am
  • PaleStar12

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    Beautiful!!! I know just how that feels... gosh.. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece!! awesome job!!! >u<
    May 26th, 2009 at 01:18am
  • Bleed?

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    WOW! I love it. But I do have one thing to ask of you, I read though it the first time and didn't feel the wow power of it. Just one request read through it again and instead of saying can't read it with can not. I bet when you read it with can not it will sound more powerful, the words will flow much more smothly and your point to the poem will be more straight forward i guess. But please of a simple poet here i ask you to read it with can not instead of can't.
    May 26th, 2009 at 12:59am
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