Fraction of a Second - Comments

  • DeleteMeForReal

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    I love this poem
    October 22nd, 2009 at 10:14am
  • serenailith

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    I agree with both RedEarth and Sean McD, this is epic, and it holds suspense with each long, enticing the reader to keep reading, maybe even re-reading as well. Good job.
    May 27th, 2009 at 04:04pm
  • The Ginger One

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    Absolutely wonderful... i love your short lines it really holds suspense and i read this one over and over again. Just great
    May 27th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • RedEarth

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    This poem can only be described with one word: EPIC
    May 27th, 2009 at 12:10am