Open your eyes... - Comments

i love this :) It's cute,

October 17th, 2009 at 04:37pm

yea the layout of the rhming is really cool
when I try and rhyme my poems end up really forced
yours isn't
I love it

August 8th, 2007 at 10:06pm

thankie you..

August 5th, 2007 at 04:25am

o.0 *claps like a maniac* I love It! =]

-Desiree

July 30th, 2007 at 04:53am

I love this! The half rhyming ish thing you have going on is reallllly cool, and the ending was my favorite.

July 30th, 2007 at 04:39am