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  • Kelsey-um Saltzman

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    i love this :) It's cute,
    October 17th, 2009 at 04:37pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    yea the layout of the rhming is really cool
    when I try and rhyme my poems end up really forced
    yours isn't
    I love it
    August 8th, 2007 at 10:06pm
  • Billy Corgan.

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    thankie you..
    August 5th, 2007 at 04:25am
  • radioactive

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    o.0 *claps like a maniac* I love It! =]

    -Desiree
    July 30th, 2007 at 04:53am
  • swollen.and.small

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    I love this! The half rhyming ish thing you have going on is reallllly cool, and the ending was my favorite.
    July 30th, 2007 at 04:39am
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