Vampira. - Comments

MarriMarr (100)

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wow awesome poem.
this is kind of what sociaty does to people.
(what i think it does)

March 30th, 2008 at 11:11pm

Heaven Help Us (100)

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I like it, its sad to sad that's happened alot to the people where I am, ( currently at school)

September 8th, 2007 at 01:26am

Pikachu (150)

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Amazing actually. I like the structure of it.
I think I caught the metaphor. The tone was nice too. Loved it. <3

August 14th, 2007 at 12:38pm

Fueled By Dana (100)

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Very interesting. I liked it. It was good. I kinda furrowed my brow in thought while reading this. Just amazing.

August 2nd, 2007 at 09:41am

oxford comma. (200)

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I like the structure and tone.
A tinge of sadness at the end, but not overwhelming.

August 2nd, 2007 at 05:01am

folie a dru. (1270)

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A poem I'm actually rather proud of.
I wrote it my senior year of school for Creative Writing class.
We were supposed to use food as a metaphor.
I chose marshmallows.

Comments are love<333

August 1st, 2007 at 12:25pm