December 15th, 2007 at 08:18am
^
The last two lines are rather shitty, I admit.
It was speaking about rumors. If you step out of line, a rumor will start about you faster than you can blink. At least, that's how it was in Bedford.
your imagery is amazing, and the concept is so meaningful. everyone who reads it will probably get something different out of it, but there's also a universal message, which not very many people can pull of in poetry (i include myself in that...;)