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  • Honeybear

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    I really liked this poem, a lot.

    When I was searching through your poems, I kept looking for an interesting title, and I found many good ones and liked what I read, too. This was one different, though. So I guess this is about vampires, but I interpreted it differently. I thought as the poem as the consequence of the title, like, making a bad choice/decision and how life can become a living hell.

    The ending, where you mentioned the teeth and stuff, made me think of how you sometimes surround yourself by negative people who will suck you dry/use you.

    I'm probably totally wrong about this poem, but I really appreciated it.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 08:03pm
  • Fall in2 the Silence

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    Hehe you sated my vampire obbession for the day.
    Lol
    eerily beautiful
    June 3rd, 2010 at 03:20pm
  • bmoverton

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    omg very good visuals! i like it =]
    July 12th, 2009 at 12:05am
  • strawberry wine

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    -shudder- oblivion.
    June 24th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Perihelion_

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    Creepiness...
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:11pm
  • nikki rae;

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    pretty good, a little creepy lol, but good
    June 5th, 2009 at 03:33am