Could you guys give me constructive criticism on this?
Internecine (enter-neh-seen) magazine
She's got her head up in her crazy dreams
"This scene aint what I see"
Pull the plug she's gonna see you free
We've got the cards
I'm gonna find a cheat
It's a boulevard of broken dreams
We've got the hearts
I'm gonna find a sheet
To make them sit down as we feed
Hey, I'm OK
Say you're sorry
Hey, I'm not free
Hey, pay your fee
Hey-o, listen to me
A solo aint gonna be
Evidence of her presents
Just shove up all of your nonsense!
Internecine (enter-neh-seen) magazine
She's got her head up in her crazy dreams
"This scene aint what I see"
Pull the plug she's gonna see you free