The Hopeless Romantic: Moving On
I'll remember her
For the rest of my life
My broken heart will heal no doubt
I'm leaving once again on a cold dark night
Just pack my bags and head on out
She's found happiness
But it's not with me
Can't complain about that, she was my queen
And I was the fool who fell in love
The memories we had, I'll never give up
One last time
It beats her name
The girl who changed me, never the same
I loved her and she loved me
It didn't work out so now I'm free
I'm here again
Alone yet hopeful
The search continues, should I look for a local?
The world is mine, and I'm its lover
A hopeless romantic, in search for another
With no direction
Anywhere is fine
North, South, East, West, I just look down and follow a line
One that will lead me to someone true
Could look up, it might be you
I'll be honest
I'm sensitive at best
You drop a few things, I'll pick up the rest
I've got no preference, girls come in masses
Though It would be nice if you were one with glasses
This is me
Trying something new
Breaking out of my box, and speaking to you
Yes, the reader, hopefully a girl
If you're a lad, I'll bid farewell
Love will come
And some will go
All but one, I'll be able to hold
To love and to care, for the rest of my life
Growing old, if she's willing, to be my wife
This could be you
Or maybe it's not
Take a chance on me, I'll love you a lot
With a wink and smile, if you say no, then I'm gone
This Hopeless Romantic is merely moving on ;)
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This is the sequel to a poem I wrote called "The Tale of the Hopeless Romantic". Which if your unfamiliar with, you can find right here:
http://poem.mibba.com/269581/The-Tale-of-the-Hopeless-Romantic
With the first one about Looking for a love to stay. I wanted to write about what happens after love doesn't work out and the only thing left to do is move on. Of course in rhyme once again which I (feel) absolutely nailed on this one. Instead of structures and placing where the rhymes would be, I focused more on how the poem would flow. A few compliments I had gotten from the first one.
YES! your comments DO help us writers improve. So please comment below and tell me what you thought. It's not often you get sequels to poems. If this goes as well as the first one did, perhaps we'll see more tales from this Hopeless Romantic. (In Rhyme of course xP)
For the rest of my life
My broken heart will heal no doubt
I'm leaving once again on a cold dark night
Just pack my bags and head on out
She's found happiness
But it's not with me
Can't complain about that, she was my queen
And I was the fool who fell in love
The memories we had, I'll never give up
One last time
It beats her name
The girl who changed me, never the same
I loved her and she loved me
It didn't work out so now I'm free
I'm here again
Alone yet hopeful
The search continues, should I look for a local?
The world is mine, and I'm its lover
A hopeless romantic, in search for another
With no direction
Anywhere is fine
North, South, East, West, I just look down and follow a line
One that will lead me to someone true
Could look up, it might be you
I'll be honest
I'm sensitive at best
You drop a few things, I'll pick up the rest
I've got no preference, girls come in masses
Though It would be nice if you were one with glasses
This is me
Trying something new
Breaking out of my box, and speaking to you
Yes, the reader, hopefully a girl
If you're a lad, I'll bid farewell
Love will come
And some will go
All but one, I'll be able to hold
To love and to care, for the rest of my life
Growing old, if she's willing, to be my wife
This could be you
Or maybe it's not
Take a chance on me, I'll love you a lot
With a wink and smile, if you say no, then I'm gone
This Hopeless Romantic is merely moving on ;)
*****************************************************************************
This is the sequel to a poem I wrote called "The Tale of the Hopeless Romantic". Which if your unfamiliar with, you can find right here:
http://poem.mibba.com/269581/The-Tale-of-the-Hopeless-Romantic
With the first one about Looking for a love to stay. I wanted to write about what happens after love doesn't work out and the only thing left to do is move on. Of course in rhyme once again which I (feel) absolutely nailed on this one. Instead of structures and placing where the rhymes would be, I focused more on how the poem would flow. A few compliments I had gotten from the first one.
YES! your comments DO help us writers improve. So please comment below and tell me what you thought. It's not often you get sequels to poems. If this goes as well as the first one did, perhaps we'll see more tales from this Hopeless Romantic. (In Rhyme of course xP)
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This is the sequel to a poem I wrote called "The Tale of the Hopeless Romantic". Which if your unfamiliar with, you can find right here:http://poem.mibba.com/269581/The-Tale-of-the-Hopeless-Romantic
With the first one about Looking for a love to stay. I wanted to write about what happens after love doesn't work out and the only thing left to do is move on. Of course in rhyme once again which I (feel) absolutely nailed on this one. Instead of structures and placing where the rhymes would be, I focused more on how the poem would flow. A few compliments I had gotten from the first one.
YES! your comments DO help us writers improve. So please comment below and tell me what you thought. It's not often you get sequels to poems. If this goes as well as the first one did, perhaps we'll see more tales from this Hopeless Romantic. (In Rhyme of course xP)