The Hopeless Romantic: Moving On - Comments

i love the tale truly and im sorry that love is so hard to find i have found mine im hopeing this peom was truly great i read the first one yesterday ur a perfect poet good luck on your search

This is amazing! I know how you feel :)

Awe thanks Kapo, you made me cry. I've been there so I can see and feel it all again thats how deep your words hit me.

OOMMGGGGG!! Me love this!!!!<3♥♥♥♥♥

Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOODDDDD AGAIN CHRIS! keep up the good work and continue writing poems like this your an amazing poet! I feel so bad for ya to have your heart broken again////:(:(
_YOUR BFF
BEAUTIFULROSE LOL IM REALLY HYPER RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the comment FallingGracefully. I left a thorough response on your page. I'll be sure to keep that idea in mind.

This is really nice. I read the first one after reading this one and you definitely did improve with the rhyme and the flow. It's a great series. I was sort of thinking at the end of the last one that the next one would be about the girl with blonde hair. But I don't really see her even mentioned here except in past tense. Maybe an idea for another poem?? I don't know

lol I'm not sure Annie. Honestly I'm not well versed in poetry structures. The best I know is Haikus and the simpler kind. I bothered to google "Villanelle" and it's sort of like that but my poem has 45 lines but follow 2 rhymes per each quatrain rule.

This is really good.

Its nice. What type of poem is it? It looks like a villanelle?

Very Nice.